I think your advert is really good. Especially doing it on your own, I think you've done a good job. The only criticism I would say is you could have added more footage.
very good advert for a solo effort, i like the use of editing and audio it goes very well with the images that are shown on the advert. i would say as a consumer i would want to see more trainers or other van products eg shirts etc but overall very good advert.
The advert is really colourful and peaceful which makes the viewer feel quite calm. One bad thing is that it doesn't show enough of the product that it's trying to sell.
I think that this advert is effective in targeting the products niche target market. The colours are used very well and it's short and sweet which wont bore the people watching the ad. One constructive criticism is that there could f maybe been one or two more different shots with different angles, but overall i think it is a creative and successful advert.
It's current, has a great vibe. Very appealing to the teenage years, which was compelling. The audio was well in sync with the footage. It would of been beneficial if you showed more footage of the product you are trying to advertise. Overall it was put together brilliantly and I enjoyed watching it!
I Like the way you used color in order to portray your product , overall i think you could have been much clearer with the advert and added more shots and close ups of the product ,the fact that it was raw and there was not as much editing involved made it stand out .....
I Liked the creative shots and how the music was in sync with the video. The urban vibe illustrates the vans culture well.
One constructive criticism is that the focus on the camera should be improved so that the shots come out more clearer and it would be better if we could see the vans more clearer, so a use of close ups would be good.
I think your advert is really good. Especially doing it on your own, I think you've done a good job. The only criticism I would say is you could have added more footage.
ReplyDeleteThe vibe is cool because you can relate it to Vans. Good use of beat to video. Only thing i could suggest is more footage of the actual product.
ReplyDeletevery good advert for a solo effort, i like the use of editing and audio it goes very well with the images that are shown on the advert. i would say as a consumer i would want to see more trainers or other van products eg shirts etc but overall very good advert.
ReplyDeleteThe advert is really colourful and peaceful which makes the viewer feel quite calm. One bad thing is that it doesn't show enough of the product that it's trying to sell.
ReplyDeleteI think your advert was really colorful and i liked the audio because it made it seem calm. Also the ending made sense with the footage.
ReplyDeleteI think that this advert is effective in targeting the products niche target market. The colours are used very well and it's short and sweet which wont bore the people watching the ad.
ReplyDeleteOne constructive criticism is that there could f maybe been one or two more different shots with different angles, but overall i think it is a creative and successful advert.
It's current, has a great vibe. Very appealing to the teenage years, which was compelling. The audio was well in sync with the footage.
ReplyDeleteIt would of been beneficial if you showed more footage of the product you are trying to advertise. Overall it was put together brilliantly and I enjoyed watching it!
I Like the way you used color in order to portray your product , overall i think you could have been much clearer with the advert and added more shots and close ups of the product ,the fact that it was raw and there was not as much editing involved made it stand out .....
ReplyDeleteI Liked the creative shots and how the music was in sync with the video. The urban vibe illustrates the vans culture well.
ReplyDeleteOne constructive criticism is that the focus on the camera should be improved so that the shots come out more clearer and it would be better if we could see the vans more clearer, so a use of close ups would be good.
I mostly liked the part when the guy is spray painting (really creative) it would of been better to see more footage but overall really good
ReplyDeletewell done